When they buried you,
It was face-down,
With your
Arms over your head.
I want to make-believe
I'm just hiding
Under the covers.
Don't worry-
I'll make them all
Go away.
You and I
Stood on the roof
During thunderstorms,
With mason jars,
Telling the heavens how sorry we were.
We have to make the angels
Stop crying.
I have fifty-four jars
Of dirty rainwater.
Every night,
Complaints of monsters
In the closet.
Each time I shut the door,
You stared into the mirror.
I can still see them.
That evening,
I walked you to the dock
And helped you
Find sea glass and
Pretty stones
To fill your pockets.
We tied and anchor to your feet.
I'll send you a post card
When I get to where I'm going.
The angels must have
Been so sad
That night,
Because it rained
For weeks.
it sounds like someone committed suicide, at least from the beginning, but yeah. as i always write, i find weird thing in poems.
it's beautiful though.
And second lol you always write the most lovely comments, dear. They really make my day.
That's actually sort of what I was going for, in fact. XD It's not often that someone reads a very similar thing in my work that I had written in it, so this is a bit shocking to me.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, dear. ^^ And I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts on the piece with me.
All caps, seven sentences.