There were
Timeless moments spent between us,
In those instants and hours before dawn;
That time when we traversed
So far away from this
Wretched house and into
The most delicious darkness
Of Andromeda-
That time before our tidal waves
Came crashing down on us again.
I would do anything to
Drown with you.
The softness of the flesh
Between your knuckles, the
Exquisite map of
Leigh-lines
On your palms;
They were like a lullaby
To my sleepy fingertips.
You used
The breath of your mouth
To teach me to close my eyes
And fall asleep.
Your contented whispers and
Observations of the sky
Showed me then how to dream.
I had no idea what home could be like
Until those seconds and infinities.
As you traveled the expanse
Between my
Fragmented collarbones
With the curiosity of your hands and
The rebuke of your lips,
I laughed,
Because you always liked
To fix things
That were broken.
Or something else like that.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, doll.
But I'm gonna try to not leave anymore melodramatic comments. ._.
The poem gives me a nostalgic feeling, also a kind of brokeness, like the feeling you have when somebody leaves you and you don't know what is going to happen next, if things are ever going to be the same again
I really don't get the REAL theme of the poem, because I suspect it's from personal experience, but for me it's about two persons that share a special bond but at the end something just doesn't seems right because differences are too strong
or at least that's what I get from the parts I can relate to...
and definetely, my favorite part is:
"That time before our tidal waves
Came crashing down on us again.
I would do anything to
Drown with you. "
I loved your poem, it's very beautiful
First of all, thank you, very much, for your lovely comment and for sharing your thoughts and feelings on it with me, dear! I can't ask for anything more than that.
You are absolutely right in saying that it is based on a personal experience. ^^ However, the ending is a little happier than what you've interpreted.
But I very much love your perspective on it and I can definitely see how it can be read that way!
Thanks again for giving my piece of attention, dear! I really appreciate that. ^^
And you are welcome, it was nothing!!! ;DDD
Drown with you.
Beautiful piece.
And I shall have to give that a listen when I next get the chance!