You are my favorite thing
You are my favorite
Story to write.
I had a dream of using the ashes of my past to write lovely words over your waiting skin, and you using your spilled blood to mark my flesh with happier endings.
There was never a time before then that I slept so sweetly.
-Is there a particular part of this piece that you liked best? Least?
-How effective is the imagery?
-Is the wording too odd?